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Silly Lil Poem by ~Scooz87:iconScooz87:





There is a calling from deep within my soul
A yearning to feeling whole again
To make this awful pain go away
My mind screams at me to make it stop
This plaguing pain lingers in the depths of body
I struggle as I take two soft spongy pillows
And place them together with dense, beige filling
A peanut butter sandwich to cure my hunger
©2005-2009 ~Scooz87
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Submitted: August 30, 2005
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I wrote this awhile ago, but finally decided to post it here...this was the first of its kind, I had never written a poem before like this, I was experimenting.
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That is, quite honestly, the best poem I've read in ages.
See, I keep telling people that peanut butter isn't just for kids, it's even in literature and everything...

Plus... I love p.b. (had it on toast every morning for about 3years) hehehehe :D

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PC games don't affect kids; I mean if Pac-Man affected us as kids, we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to repetitive electronic music." - K. Wilson, Nintendo (1989)
hahaha! well I am glad you liked the poem and thanx for the fave on it. ^^ I love p.b. too but my doctor says I have to moderate my metabolism which means...not a lot of p.b. :: sniffles :: but I will live for now.

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